Again, from Lies That Bind. This scene was taking the story through another step in the entire process. There were things I loved going this direction, but critiques convinced me the step was unnecessary. “That was delicious. I was starving.” Gwen patted her napkin over plump lips. “So tell me, where are you going to look for a ...
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Two hours later Kelly had to admit, after being comfortably ensconced in a vibrating leather chair, feet soaking in soothing scented water that this was exactly what the doctor ordered. The technician, a thin Asian woman tapped her leg. Kelly raised her foot as requested. She wondered how old she was. Asian woman never seemed to age. She ...
Continue ReadingFrom my latest release – Lies That Bind, I deleted 10,000 words. It hurt, like a paper cut doused with alcohol. But here it is. You be the judge–should it have been nixed? Chapter Nineteen One Month Later “Does it have to be so big?” Kelly demanded. Alex bit back a grin. “My mother is very persistent.” “Yes, I’ve ...
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